not a hike-you

[roblovesplastic]

um can we just write on this?
lets see

[roblovesplastic]

i drown in you
and rise alive
enjoy u
love
[evil]

[karia]

Come back,

That's all we ask of you

rob lovesplatic...we have thought

anew!

karia

[canuck]

This ancient brain
Can't hike as fast
As you youngsters.

(In other words, I haven't a clue what this is all about.)

[horseman]

This ancient brain
Can't hike as fast
As you youngsters.

(In other words, I haven't a clue what this is all about.)

my thoughts entirely,but thought it was just me:)

[canuck]

Not too many leaps into the future, roblovesplastic is going to write a dictionary for me explaining all this modernspeak that goes right over my head. Then he will discover its universal appeal and make his fortune selling it on the open market to we ancient of brain.


Afterthought: Was I supposed to put that in poetic form? Gosh, it was too long for a regular haiku. I need to explore this new hike-you form.

[trinkie]

roblovesplastic

Good to see you here !
Though not quite a Hike u - I give you Thumps up for trying.

I look forward to a translation in the 5 7 5 .

First line has five beats
Second line has seven beats
Third line has five beats

Trinkie

[roblovesplastic]

First line has five beats
Second line has seven beats
Third line has five beats

nice one

um I started this thread but as usual got lost after the 2nd post.

No I just didn't see a section or popular post for Poems, maybe thats a good idea?

bobspatastic