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    A sleepy lioness, Morven keeps one wary eye
    On her playful Northern cub, romping innocent beside
    A carrion-hungry world

    Dunnet Head’s pugnacious chin thrust out
    Facing down the endless aggression of Atlantic bully
    While Stroma lurks, a half-sister thrown out of flagstone family
    Forever pushed away, punished for some forgotten geological crime

    Trees against the gunmetal dome of a side-to-side sky
    Tortured, twisted arms stretch South begging relief
    From North wind’s ceaseless bluster

    The castle is a beacon, symbol of a civilisation
    That showed its kindly stone face to those who would not strive
    To follow the flock and who, as punishment, were displaced by one
    Their strath now a vast, empty millstone for inheritors
    Who must kill birds for their profit yet build paths for our pleasure

    The rusting pleasure-steamer Dounreay is sinking by the bow
    Once pride of the fleet, carrying us all to a cleaner, better future
    Now, her crew pumping madly, she slips below the waves

    Thurso, the old sailor, swims for salvation in the bar
    Endlessly recycling tales of nuclear glory and horror
    Unclear on the detail of what, or who, or why
    But certain he played a major part in that famous victory

    While poor spinster Wick yearns for the boats that once filled her harbour
    When travellers gutted and moved on, leaving only a lingering scent of herring
    Still she stands, waiting for the world to come around again

    Flagstone dykes, ill-kept teeth bared in defiance
    At the circling crows of poverty, ever-waiting to peck
    At the roadkill of those who remain

    Yet, tendrils of new growth spring up
    Feasting on a compost of ambition and niche
    Rare seedlings tended by nurserymen with an eye
    To future harvests of oil or wind or tide

    Synchronised white cheerleaders wave wildly
    At another score for the green and the greedy
    Wrestling the gale, feet pierced deep into peat-flesh,
    Creating unseen gold from turn and turn and turn

    The Groat summarises arrivals, departures
    Our big hearts and small minds
    Warriors and harlots; drink, drugs, driving
    We gleefully follow our scumbags’ progress
    As another layer is added to the sedimentary rock of our history

    Our County breathes, in the movement of people
    The steady inhale - exhale of growth and contraction
    The coming of refugee, departure of disaffected native
    Loss of gap-year daughter, return of our prodigal son

    Fertile earth for growing and multiplying, dividing and dying
    Last edited by Tubthumper; 29-Apr-09 at 12:27. Reason: Changed text size
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    Wonderfully descriptive poem, Tubthumper! Very picturesque writing, which I thoroughly enjoyed reading!
    I am living for today, always remembering yesterday, and looking forward to tomorrow!

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    Incredible poem Tubthumper! So full of passion and description - fantastic!


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    Conjures up a great image, well written.

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    Cracker Tubthumper.
    Their coming to take me away.....haha-hee-hee-ho-ho

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