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    Post The bully

    here is a poem i started in school, found it when clearing out, i just tidyed it up a little.

    Being clever isnt all good
    when the b.o repulsive steals your food
    kicks you down for your money
    then has the cheek to think its funny

    sure im not the handsome kid
    been beaten up for a couple of quid
    so i kick back and throw a punch
    and sit hungry and sore, through lunch

    teachers listen? - ha that be right
    they just walk past two kids in a fight
    broken, that was my favourite toy
    scared for life by the snot eating boy

    so i plan my final attack
    gather my mates, my pride and my baseball bat
    i sense a moment we went for the kill
    until it all went sour, at the end of lunch bell

    we knew where he lived so we camped out the night
    plotting to attack him at the dawns light
    he knew we were there, he was so scared
    but the tears in his eyes, my the tables had turned.

    So i left him alone to pursue my studies
    and could smell his fear sourcing from his undies
    I stopped the attack in fear of sin
    for the realisation, i was becoming like him
    I'm as mad as hell and I'm not going to take this anymore

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    You could be a massive Rap star.

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    i just have a good sense of rhyme
    mainly just because i can fit words in most of the time
    put my points of view upon this site
    and end up staying on this all through the night.

    putting messages on threads during the day
    find time on this site at work and at play
    come home and straight on the pc i go
    and come on the org with the ppl i dont really know.

    meh
    I'm as mad as hell and I'm not going to take this anymore

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    Quote Originally Posted by Invisible View Post
    i just have a good sense of rhyme
    mainly just because i can fit words in most of the time
    put my points of view upon this site
    and end up staying on this all through the night.

    putting messages on threads during the day
    find time on this site at work and at play
    come home and straight on the pc i go
    and come on the org with the ppl i dont really know.

    meh
    Rhyming is fine, is spitting the terminology?
    If rapping was a science you would have an honours in rapology.

    Damn that was lame, sorry.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TBH View Post
    Rhyming is fine, is spitting the terminology?
    If rapping was a science you would have an honours in rapology.

    Damn that was lame, sorry.
    thats going as my tag line! so good
    I'm as mad as hell and I'm not going to take this anymore

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    Really enjoyed that, cheers
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    Quote Originally Posted by TBH View Post
    Damn that was lame, sorry.
    Lamer than a lame duck in a prosthetics factory.

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    give TBH a break i thought it was awesome
    I'm as mad as hell and I'm not going to take this anymore

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