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Thread: My Poem/Rap

  1. #1
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    Default My Poem/Rap

    I've written this as a rap which I will be recording in the next few days.
    Have produced the music just got to do my rap now.
    I know this may be a bit different but i wrote it as a rap but think its not to bad a poem.
    It only took me 10 mins to write,it just "flowed" out.
    Have a read and tell me what you think.
    (Can post the link to the finished song when I'm done if anyone wants)
    Here goes:
    My Family




    Born and raised but still learning the game
    never done nothing wrong to hang my head in shame
    tried hard to make a success of this one and only life
    Got myself 3 kids and a wonderful wife
    Gonna do all I can to give them all they'll ever want
    cos I know if I don't it'll come back to haunt
    Me for the rest of my days until my dying breath
    The only thing to separate me will be death
    I'm Gonna always be there to show how much I care
    Everything that is mine , is mine for them to share
    I'll never walk away from them in their hour of need
    Gonna try everything to make sure that I succeed
    At life in general I'll always do my best
    Even when all around me are trying to test
    Me to see if I can be all I wanted to be
    But I'll always be nothing unless I've got my ....Family




    Verse 2


    Life throws up many obstacles and puts in your way
    All the things to tempt you and lead you astray
    From your path of righteousness that you must follow through
    There's only one person to blame and that's you
    So you gotta get your head down get a grip of yourself
    Do all that you can do to take care of your health
    look into the eyes of the ones who love you the most
    Be there for them forever always hold them real close
    Cos you never know when your engines Gonna stop
    Never know when the curtain comin down from the top
    So you gotta seize the day as if its your last
    Keep yourself in the slow lane,life passes too fast
    Always be good to yourself and the rest will follow
    Never count the days there's always tomorrow
    Take a look at yourself always aim to be free
    But you'll never be nothing unless you got the love of your....Family

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    Thumbs up

    I really enjoyed that and yes, please post the link when it is ready.....well done.

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    Default Rao

    Yes - I really enjoyed that. I like the genre and the sentiments!

    Look forward to your next

    Trinkie

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    Default

    Thanks for that.Appreciate the comments.
    As I said I know I've written it as a rap but to me it has a poem type feel.
    Its just a subject that I am sure most would be able to just flow with as its something we all have and probably feel.
    I write 2 or 3 raps a day but some of the subjects and lyrics may be a bit too risque (for want of a better word) to post on here!!

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    Have put up my first take for the tune.
    its here:http://www.myspace.com/hamystar
    There are a few tunes I have done on there as long as you stick to the first 3 tunes there are no swear words!!!!! Just letting you know in case anyone takes offence!!!.
    its just a rough version at the moment ,got a bit more work to do on it.
    Hope you like it!

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    That brilliant , well done and thank you for sharing .
    love light and laughter
    whitecloud x

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