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    A wee poem by myself .Who am I ?


    Who am I ,I am the sun that shines bright,warming your heart,bringing life to all,I am part of you
    I am water ,the drink of life, I am the cleanser ,I am part of you
    I am the wind that brings change,breath me for I am part of you
    I am the earth your mother care for me, as I care for you, for I am part of you
    I am the stars that shine bright on a dark night to remind you I am part of you
    I am in all life ,feel me, you are never alone,please don't forget I am part of you

    Love light and laughter
    michelle

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    "Who are you ?" Looks like you have already discovered ! Well done.

    I'm still trying to find out....!


    Keep writing

    "You are the pen that spreads the ink
    You are the one who makes me think
    Should I write today or stay by the sink
    And clean up after all the others "

    Trinkie

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    Like your poem Michelle; well done and I hope you have more.....

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    Thank you for your lovely comments dont look at myself as a poet by any means, nature is my love with its endless beauty it inspires me.
    love light and laughter
    michelle x

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    Quote Originally Posted by trinkie View Post
    "Who are you ?" Looks like you have already discovered ! Well done.

    I'm still trying to find out....!


    Keep writing

    "You are the pen that spreads the ink
    You are the one who makes me think
    Should I write today or stay by the sink
    And clean up after all the others "

    Trinkie
    I am the fart that spreads the stink
    The one that makes you go 'whew'
    I am the one who makes you think
    He'd better rush to the loo.

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    You are the White Cloud wafting over the sky
    On a warm summer’s day, I gaze as I lie
    in the shade of a tree, with others, as we
    Wait for more …. Oh hear our plea !


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    Now is the time

    now is the time,to let go of all pain
    to speak with your heart,and become one again
    to open your eyes, see with non judgemental sight
    come open your arms and bring in the light
    come open your heart let it shine from within
    come open your soul, let joy begin
    come open your ears,stop listening to fear
    come join together the message is clear

    whitecloud

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    Gather no one liked this one lol told u i was not a poet. Sorry guys
    love light and laughter
    whitecloud x

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    I liked it !
    You certainly have a way with words .
    On this thread we go for weeks without replying - unlike General where folk chat more ! Likely we are a queer lot !!

    Dont despair, keep writing and have faith in yourself.
    Although it's nice to have praise from time to time - you will know what's good or not so good. You will be your own best judge.

    Anyway thanks for the prod - it's good to be reminded sometimes !

    Trinkie
    I am the one who needs to be prodded
    The forgetful, The scatterbrain who thinks 'Oh well sod it'
    The one who takes on too much work in a day
    While others around me, just get out and play
    I love nothing more than sitting with words
    Or gazing at clouds and watching the birds
    As they fly so high o'er rooftops and trees
    Whilst inside my room it's so cold, I could freeze !

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    Thank you trinkie nothing wrong with looking at the clouds and birds one of my favorite past times too,I think for me it depends on the mood im in to what kind of poems I write.I have a silly poem I wrote in my early teens, I used to write loads of them then, this one I wrote when I was in a bit of a mood.

    One day I walked down the road
    I bumped into a little toad
    The little toad said its name was Fred
    I said that very interesting
    Then stood on the s head

    whitecloud x

    Bob-your out your tree
    greg- its not mine

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    Alas poor toad he is no more,
    Just a brown splodge upon the floor!
    Poor Fred came to a sticky end
    Mebbe he should have turned the bend!

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    I'm Sporran, a woman who likes words that rhyme
    I've been known to write poems from time to time
    I grew up in Thurso a long time ago
    Then with my hubby, overseas I did go
    I like to visit Caithness.Org ev'ry day
    It makes my homeland seem closer that way!

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    In africa I stayed for two years I may say
    The heat and the sun was so hot I would pray
    Give me the cold, rain and snow
    Give me green grass and the rolling hills I know
    So out of Africa I ran quite fast
    Back home in scotland at last

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