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**teenybash** · 17-May-08, 11:02

All you have to do to take part is write what you feel happens next.........

Davy wasn't sure what he had just seen but, he knew it had left him feeling uneasy as he made his way through the gates and on up to the big house.

**ciderally** · 17-May-08, 20:01

the path was overgrown with weeds, and the rain wasent helping, but he could see a movement at the front door...or was it his imagination...

**Kenn** · 17-May-08, 20:07

No, it was merely the wisteria caught by the soughing wind that had caught the silver rays of the moon as she passed between the scudding clouds.

**padfoot** · 17-May-08, 22:17

he continues up the path warily and heads up to the door and rings the door bell as an omunious figure apears by the door

**TBH** · 19-May-08, 10:13

Davy does his sales pitch, "I was wondering if you are interested in getting a new path laid, we can also do you a deal on a tarmac driveway"?

**Anne x** · 19-May-08, 10:27

While we are here Missus I can trim your Trees and cut the Hedge weeding at no extra charge

**TBH** · 19-May-08, 11:18

The woman pauses for a second, tightening her grip on the handle of the potato peeler she was using to remove the callus from her heels.

**Julia** · 19-May-08, 12:12

Davy sensed the woman's anxiousness and asked "are you alright?", her grip on the potato peeler loosened and it fell to the beautifully tiled floor with a distinct clatter, "let me get that for you" said Davy and reached downward but the woman grabbed his hand and said....

**wifie** · 19-May-08, 15:34

"No mortal must touch the peeler!", and with a horrified look she.......

**TBH** · 19-May-08, 15:48

Said in a creepy, child-like voice, "Are you my Daddy"?

**Anne x** · 19-May-08, 16:47

No !! I am only the Odd Job man who is your Mother again ?

**ciderally** · 19-May-08, 17:14

It wasent supposed to be like this, this wasent the plan

**brokencross** · 20-May-08, 18:03

The grandfather clock in the hall struck 12 noon, there was a massive peal of thunder and the heavens opened. The woman says you had better come in out of the rain and Davy says:-

**Anne x** · 20-May-08, 18:36

But !!! I normally go in through the back door the woman shook her head and said

**TBH** · 20-May-08, 23:44

"Your life is about to change in ways you cannot imagine".

**brokencross** · 21-May-08, 07:40

Davy's curiosity is aroused by this scantily clad, but scarey lady; he thinks to himself "to hell with it" and decides to go in, but just for a few moments to see what happens.
He steps forward to go through the gaping door but in his eagerness trips and falls flat on his face in the lobby.

**TBH** · 21-May-08, 10:04

Davy's eyes open to discover he's now a in a beautiful, oak-panelled room. "What happened?", said davie.

**Anne x** · 21-May-08, 10:37

you tripped on your Boot Laces handing him a glass of water

**teenybash** · 21-May-08, 14:30

which he drank hoping it would clear his head and he would come to his senses...............but the woman was tugging at his clothes, as if to tear them off and...................