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    I was gonna use this for a song, it's written as such, but I never got round to it.

    I said you had my heart,
    you had it on a plate,
    it didn't get me far,
    you chose to throw it away,
    this loss hit me hard,
    my world is ablaze,
    you didn't want this part,
    you didn't wanna stay

    i knew it wasn't meant to be,
    i'm glad you're not the one for me

    there's another,
    waiting out there,
    do i call?
    or will she call for me,
    i won't wonder,
    what is out there,
    found the perfect,
    fit for me

    we slowly drift apart,
    what more can i say?
    you just got in your car,
    and drove far away,
    i'm back to the start,
    I'm in a daze,
    a broken part,
    starts mending today

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    Jeid, thanks for the contribution - glad to have more variety as well.
    Why no title? Indecision? Painful memories?
    Would Moving On work?


    "A family tree can wither if nobody tends it's roots"

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    Thanks very much.

    It usually takes me ages to come up with titles and its usually best for me to hear how the song would go before making that decision.

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    Can be hard finding the right title. I think generally I use the general theme of the piece, as in my poem Journey, for that is exactly what the poem is about. In your work, I get a sense of Moving On hence my suggestion.


    "A family tree can wither if nobody tends it's roots"

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