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No Title
I was gonna use this for a song, it's written as such, but I never got round to it.
I said you had my heart,
you had it on a plate,
it didn't get me far,
you chose to throw it away,
this loss hit me hard,
my world is ablaze,
you didn't want this part,
you didn't wanna stay
i knew it wasn't meant to be,
i'm glad you're not the one for me
there's another,
waiting out there,
do i call?
or will she call for me,
i won't wonder,
what is out there,
found the perfect,
fit for me
we slowly drift apart,
what more can i say?
you just got in your car,
and drove far away,
i'm back to the start,
I'm in a daze,
a broken part,
starts mending today
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Jeid, thanks for the contribution - glad to have more variety as well.
Why no title? Indecision? Painful memories?
Would Moving On work?
"A family tree can wither if nobody tends it's roots"
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Thanks very much.
It usually takes me ages to come up with titles and its usually best for me to hear how the song would go before making that decision.
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Can be hard finding the right title. I think generally I use the general theme of the piece, as in my poem Journey, for that is exactly what the poem is about. In your work, I get a sense of Moving On hence my suggestion.
"A family tree can wither if nobody tends it's roots"
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