alex
23-Jun-09, 19:45
I have decided to offer all my free giveaway Tesco vouchers and stuff to the person who comes in with the best story on the above theme.
Rule One: It must relate to the title
Rule Two: No more than 500 words
If anyone plays we could grow this.
Okay so here's my sample text:
I hate waiting, swinging back and forth pretending to be cool with it while she doesn’t call.
Chrishst, there she is… with Jazz and Dave, laughing, with chips in their hands.
I’m an idiot I should of gone to the chippy with them. She runs ahead though, smiling and says “Hi”
And I try to be cool and steal a chip but I’m a bit dizzy. I spill her chips.
“You plonk!” grins Jazz as he shoves his arm into her elbow. “Here, girl, share these.”
“C’mon let’s try the new roundabout”, Dave is already on it, kind of goat stepping to make it go round.
We jump on – Dave pushes for a bit then … when it’s really going grabs on as well.
Grabbing the rail my head smacks against her and we laugh and she looks at my eyes.
Jazz jumps off “Crazy eejits, let’s make it go faster” and pushes on, the roundabout spins faster.
I’m kissing. I’m really kissing…
Rule One: It must relate to the title
Rule Two: No more than 500 words
If anyone plays we could grow this.
Okay so here's my sample text:
I hate waiting, swinging back and forth pretending to be cool with it while she doesn’t call.
Chrishst, there she is… with Jazz and Dave, laughing, with chips in their hands.
I’m an idiot I should of gone to the chippy with them. She runs ahead though, smiling and says “Hi”
And I try to be cool and steal a chip but I’m a bit dizzy. I spill her chips.
“You plonk!” grins Jazz as he shoves his arm into her elbow. “Here, girl, share these.”
“C’mon let’s try the new roundabout”, Dave is already on it, kind of goat stepping to make it go round.
We jump on – Dave pushes for a bit then … when it’s really going grabs on as well.
Grabbing the rail my head smacks against her and we laugh and she looks at my eyes.
Jazz jumps off “Crazy eejits, let’s make it go faster” and pushes on, the roundabout spins faster.
I’m kissing. I’m really kissing…