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Tugmistress
13-Oct-06, 22:03
Sabre

The sun was shining upon my head,
But I wasn't lying in my bed,
I went outside and pottered around,
Over the fields and the dew bound ground.

This used to be fun, I thought with pride,
When I could run and jump and frollick and glide,
My eyesight's not great, I can hardly see,
Every step I take there's a creak in my knee.

My toenails are long, my hair is grey,
I spend most days sleeping I am afraid to say,
The babbling brook, the fields, the sun,
I remember them all, each and every one!

My ma she is crying and fussing my neck,
I'm old and I'm dying, I feel like a wreck,
Nice people are here to help me pass by,
Today was a good day to die.

Kenn
13-Oct-06, 22:37
Lovely epitaph for an old friend Tugs.

changilass
14-Oct-06, 00:22
Thats lovely, sorry for your loss Tuggs

JAWS
14-Oct-06, 02:23
Oh dear, Tuggs. There's nothing I can say, but I'm sure words aren't needed.
Many of us have been there and understand.

sassylass
14-Oct-06, 02:54
That's a sweet poem for an old faithful friend.

highlander
14-Oct-06, 11:18
So sorry to read about your loss Tuggs

Liz
14-Oct-06, 12:21
So sorry for your loss Paula. Those of us who have been there know how you are feeling.:(

What a lovely epitaph for a lovely dog.

WeeBurd
14-Oct-06, 17:35
Oh Tugs, that was so lovely. I wish I could say something to help... :(

moose and Lindsay
14-Oct-06, 18:25
Paula Davie and Karina

I am so sorry for your loss,

The poem was beautiful (I cried when i read it :( )

Thinking of u all

Take care

Lindsay

golach
14-Oct-06, 18:31
Tuggs now that is a poem I can understand, My condolences to you on your sad loss.
Maybe you could adopt Bushy, I hear he is house trained :lol:

Bobinovich
14-Oct-06, 21:20
Apologies Tuggs - after glancing over the first few lines I was just going to move the post to the Literature forum, then I read on.

I'm sorry to hear of your loss. Pets quickly become additional members of the family, even though common sense tells us we shouldn't let them, and the sense of loss with a pet - who's often been around as long as, or longer than, the kids - can be difficult to overcome.

Best wishes to you all

dragonfly
14-Oct-06, 21:24
heartfelt condolences to you and your family Tugmistress :( ! your poem moved me to tears and has had me thinking about my own pets 2 of whom are getting on in years. They may be "just pets" to some but to animal lovers they are family!

Moira
14-Oct-06, 21:39
Touching tribute to your best friend Tuggs. I dread the day I will face this with my dog. Thinking of you all.

kas
16-Oct-06, 11:12
Again I am so sorry on your news. I hope the others are bearing up.
What a beautiful poem, very fitting.